Peter's Scribbles

Peter's Scribbles

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Peter's Scribbles
Peter's Scribbles
Falling Light

Falling Light

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Peter Smetanick
Dec 04, 2023
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Peter's Scribbles
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Falling Light
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I’ve been so alone, 
But you kinda threw me a bone.

Yes, it was only online, 
But I didn’t think you’d be so kind.

I wish I could explain
That I understand your pain. 

Maybe I really don’t.
Maybe I should just float. 
Float on to another world, 
One where I fall for another girl. 

I always get myself into a mess 
A…

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