I bet you don't care anymore
Poem
I start going Without showing, That I needed All that she did. I don’t know why I stumbled, But I found out When we crumbled. I, I bet you don’t care anymore. Everything is different now that you are gone, Nothing will ever be the same. We wake up in separate beds, Hoping to move on again, But I just can’t stand us being done. It’s not broken, Just frozen. The sun will rise and Warm both ends. I, I bet you don’t care anymore. Yeah I, I bet you don’t care anymore. Everything I love runs away from me, Why can’t I just keep it for myself? I’ve been drowning in my tears And hiding from my fears, There’s no room left for anyone but me. It’s not broken, Just frozen. The sun will rise and Warm both ends. I, I bet you don’t care anymore. Yeah I, I bet you don’t care anymore.
Thank you for sharing this Peter.
I am torn to critique / praise / criticize this poem because it is clearly torn from the heart. Regarding the poem, I will say I read it a number of time over a number of days (as any should any poem) and can only say well done. On the life events on which it was founded all I can say is I wish you well and continue writing.
This one hit home