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Thank you for sharing this Peter.

I am torn to critique / praise / criticize this poem because it is clearly torn from the heart. Regarding the poem, I will say I read it a number of time over a number of days (as any should any poem) and can only say well done. On the life events on which it was founded all I can say is I wish you well and continue writing.

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This one hit home

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Peter,

This is such a good poem.

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Thanks for giving me a read Joel :)

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