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Rafa Joseph's avatar

Really captivating story! I love the intimate dialect of the speaker, drawing the reader into his own little world.

My brother once chugged some bleach as a toddler. I'd like to say "he wasn't right" afterward, but he appears to have made a full recovery : )

Peter Smetanick's avatar

Hey Rafa, thanks for your kind words, loved working on this one!

Yeah, I get the feeling bleach don't go down too smooth. Glad to know your brother is just fine.

Nancy Muldoon's avatar

good story. thank you for sharing

Peter Smetanick's avatar

Appreciate you giving me a read Nancy! Thanks for stopping over 😊

Nancy Muldoon's avatar

I have some stories from my life in the notes section of my substack if you are interested you can check them out there

Peter Smetanick's avatar

Yeah, I'll try to swing over to your page soon! Looking forward 😁