Peter's Scribbles

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The Bluest Eyes

The Bluest Eyes

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Aug 31, 2024
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This short story is an edited and re-written version of “I remember.” A story that featured in Avalon Literature and Arts Magazine.

I became unhappy with how the published version turned out. It veered too far from the original story. The story below is much closer to the first draft, while also containing parts of later drafts. I hope you enjoy “The Bl…

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