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Marjorie Pezzoli's avatar

I completely agree and relate to your poem.

Married 5 dog years (each pup was our favorite) 38 in people years.

Your time details, zooming into precise moments are wonderful. Right on- Write on!

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Peter Smetanick's avatar

Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts! This poem is from my cousin Max, but I just had to share it.

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Dr. David Thor's avatar

I wonder if Max could benefit from a couple of Better Bachelor videos. I'm not young, so it's just a guess.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

I love this title and the poem did not let me down. So many telling lines, so many ways to take stock, not judge, just learn. Thank you!

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Peter Smetanick's avatar

Glad you enjoyed this poem Shawn! I think Max killed it with this one.

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