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Rebekah Mallory's avatar

The fireflies 😢 I always let them go.

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Peter Smetanick's avatar

Hey Rebekah, sorry about the fireflies. They're too beautiful to be caught, but I think a lot of us had fun trapping them in a jar. Hopefully most of us let them go...

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Jim J Wilsky's avatar

Just excellence, right there. I have so much respect for poetry writers. I can't do it, but I sure wish I could. My few attempts in the past have been terrific failures.

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Peter Smetanick's avatar

Hey Jim, I hope you enjoyed. Max's poetry is very intriguing I think.

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James Don BlueWolf's avatar

Striking imagery and some awesome moments that kept me pushing toward our disappearance...

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Peter Smetanick's avatar

I hope you enjoyed, James. I like this poem.

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C.J. Heck's avatar

I love your poem, Peter. I can relate. Thank you for the memories.

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Peter Smetanick's avatar

Thanks for your kind words C.J. I can't take credit for this poem, I have featured a couple poems from my cousin Max. I can relate as well.

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